雅思考試寫(xiě)作技巧常見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤有哪些?
2022-03-24點(diǎn)擊量:3489
考雅思的同學(xué)每天都在練習(xí)寫(xiě)作文,不少考生認(rèn)為只要長(zhǎng)期的寫(xiě),堅(jiān)持練習(xí)雅思寫(xiě)作就能取得進(jìn)步,實(shí)則不然。在翻閱大量雅思作文后可以發(fā)現(xiàn),雅思考生們的文章中出現(xiàn)大量語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。這些錯(cuò)誤多集中在幾個(gè)方面。雅思考試寫(xiě)作技巧常見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤1.雙謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)句e.g.Forthoseunder26,therewere80%studentsstudyforcareer.Therebe句型屬于雙謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)句高發(fā)句型,因?yàn)榫渲械腷e動(dòng)詞已經(jīng)是謂語(yǔ),而句子后面的動(dòng)詞通常是定語(yǔ)從句中的成分,故不能作為主句中的謂語(yǔ)。例句中同時(shí)出現(xiàn)了“were”和“study”,根據(jù)上面的分析,were應(yīng)該是謂語(yǔ),而studyforcareer應(yīng)該是定語(yǔ)從句,因此,例句應(yīng)修正改成:Forthoseunder26,therewere80%studentswhostudiedforcareer.或者Forthoseunder26,therewere80%studentsstudyingforcareer.又如:Causesforthisphenomenonarecomprehensivebutthemajorreasonscontributetothisproblemcanbeidentifiedfromthreeperspectives.應(yīng)改成:Causesforthisphenomenonarecomprehensivebutthemajorreasonscontributing/whichcontributetothisproblemcanbeidentifiedfromthreeperspectives.雅思考試寫(xiě)作技巧常見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤2.句子不完整e.g.Themostpopularkindoftransportwasbyroad.句中主語(yǔ)是themostpopularkindoftransport,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞(系動(dòng)詞)是was,而byroad按照語(yǔ)法應(yīng)該是方式狀語(yǔ),此句缺乏表語(yǔ)。應(yīng)改成:Themostpopularkindoftransportwasroad.又如:Manyfactoriesinordertogetmoreprofits,whichmadewastewaterandwastegas.去除目的狀語(yǔ)“inordertogetmoreprofits”和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句“whichmadewastewaterandwastegas”,剩下的是manyfactories,不能作為一個(gè)句子。根據(jù)此句想表達(dá)的意思,應(yīng)該改為:Manyfactoriesinordertogetmoreprofitsmadewastewaterandwastegas.雅思考試寫(xiě)作技巧常見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤3.主系表結(jié)構(gòu)使用錯(cuò)誤e.g.Weareimpossibletomakeanyprogresswithoutcorrectingthemistakes.此句的主干結(jié)構(gòu)是:weareimpossible“我們是不可能”,表意不對(duì)。這種表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)中對(duì)應(yīng)的句型是:Itis…for…to…,所以應(yīng)該改成:Itisimpossibleforustomakeanyprogresswithoutcorrectingthemistakes.類(lèi)似的錯(cuò)誤例句還有:PeopleareveryconvenienttogetinformationontheInternet.Hisprofessionisateacher.雅思考試寫(xiě)作技巧常見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤4.情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后的動(dòng)詞原形和動(dòng)名詞的使用出錯(cuò)e.g.Anotherequallyvitalpointtobeconsideredisthatbuildingthemmaycostsmuchmoneyandenergy.這種錯(cuò)誤可能是筆誤,在雅思作文中偶爾出現(xiàn)不至于扣分,但是通篇都是這樣的錯(cuò)誤,那么肯定是有影響的。e.g.Anotherpointtobediscussedisthatmoretimespendingoncomputersisharmfultochildren’smentalhealth.“花更多時(shí)間在電腦上”這個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)作為主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該要用動(dòng)名詞形式:Anotherpointtobediscussedisthatspendingmoretimeoncomputersisharmfultochildren’smentalhealth.雅思考試寫(xiě)作技巧常見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤5.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)用錯(cuò)e.g.AsfarasIamconcerned,peopleshouldtakeexerciseandrelaxthemselvesonaweeklybasis.Becauseitoffersgreatopportunitiestoreleasetheirstress.Because引導(dǎo)的句子做原因狀語(yǔ)從句,既然是從句,那么前面就不應(yīng)該使用句號(hào)使其獨(dú)立成句,而應(yīng)該改成逗號(hào),because首字母小寫(xiě)。雅思考試寫(xiě)作技巧常見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤6.詞性使用錯(cuò)誤e.g.Onepossiblesolutionisusingthenewenergytoinsteadofthetraditionalenergy.Insteadof是介詞,而這里構(gòu)成todo(不定式),只能用動(dòng)詞。因此,可改為:Onepossiblesolutionisusingthenewenergytoreplacethetraditionalenergy.e.g.Nowadays,somestudentsstudymanysubjectsinuniversity,whichleadstothattheysuffergreatmentalpressure.Leadto中to是介詞,后面不能直接加句子,因此可在leadsto后加一名詞,構(gòu)成同位語(yǔ)從句:Nowadays,somestudentsstudymanysubjectsinuniversity,whichleadstothefactthattheysuffergreatmentalpressure.或Nowadays,somestudentsstudymanysubjectsinuniversity,whichmakesthemsuffergreatmentalpressure.雅思考試寫(xiě)作技巧常見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤7.從句的誤用和濫用e.g.ThereasonwhyIassertitisnecessaryforgovernmenttoprovidebettereducationandhealthcareforruralareasbecauseitcanensureallcitizenstohaveaccesstothem.“why…ruralareas”在句中作thereason的定語(yǔ),固定句式“thereasonwhy…isthat…”why引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句連用,這就是所謂的高分句型。e.g.Inthisessay,Iwilldiscusswhatthose,whoaretwokindsofpeopleinthistopic,arehowtothinkandhowtochoose....